What Did I Do?

What Did I Do?

A Poem by Incandescence

The light is gone.

Faded completely.


I'm lost with the crowd.

No longer worthy,


of feeling love,

of being with you.


Or that's what you made

me think, is it true?


I wonder,

What did I do to deserve this?


What did I do to feel

the pain that I'll never get over it.


What did I do to feel

so lost and hurt inside?


What did I do to feel

like I'll never, ever be bright?


What did I do to feel

that I can no longer trust?


What did I do to

make you search for lust.


You are no longer the

man I thought you were.


You are just a boy

without a single care in the world.

© 2011 Incandescence

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You simply left yourself open to other humans. I like it. You could polish it more with an edit or two, as we all can every time we write, but I like the honest feel of it.

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Added on January 23, 2011
Last Updated on January 23, 2011



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Writing is what I've done my whole life. Sadly, I believe I'm losig my touch. But I will keep trying. No matter how bad my work is. I love Taylor Swift, Paramore, Michael Jackson and John Mayer. They .. more..

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