Distant We Are

Distant We Are

A Poem by Inkoutdapen

Distant
So distant we are
Time running fast and making  it so hard
It felt like yesterday but 2 years is so far
From where we were to who we are
Now
Please don't blame it all on me
I had a lot of problems fall on me
I told you, you could always call on me
So why be mad at me? now you have guilt swallowing me
I thought at first I belong to you
However, I noticed I did something wrong to you
Not being able  to try and get along with you
Not many people I fell for, but you were among the few
Then I see you weren't free, so I had to learn to breathe
Being your friend was a God given treat, nothing less nothing more sweet

© 2010 Inkoutdapen


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I like this write! excellent. Maybe a second writing, combined to this could make a great song, I'm sure someone would be interested in writing music to it. Even if its just words, I could hear the music at the back of my head. Great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, this is sweet :)
There were some spots when he flow was off, but nonetheless a good write.



Posted 13 Years Ago



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Inkoutdapen
Inkoutdapen

Toronto, Canada



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