Woman

Winking stars,

their smiles 

shine for you.

I wish I knew the words.

Maybe a compass to point you,

lenses to help you see.

In all the universe, in 

this tiny little world,

it is your uniqueness

that makes you beautiful.

Author's Note

picture from http://www.wallng.com/star-shine-vector-graphics-sfondi-per-computer/#.UoqlgfmThlA

Reviews

[Ruth]

Ohh...nice hon! Really good...love this, not much else to say except beautiful xx

[Mark]

Thank you Poppy! :)

[redflutterby]

This goes to show that flowery exaggerated compliments fall short of classic heartfelt sincerity. What womans heart wouldn't be touched by this poem? Perfect Mark...

[Mark]

Thank you. :)

[MsJewel]

Absolutely beautiful!
:) Julie

[Mark]

Thank you ! :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

What an exquisite poem, Mark. I loved every word and the graphic is lovely, too!

[Mark]

Thank you very much for reading :)

[Mary]

This is a beautifully written, loving poem, Mark. Precious in simplicity

[Mark]

thank you dear Mary. I"m glad you liked :)

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem, packed with big imagery that reflects down to the personal level, like it..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An excellent tribute to Woman. So very true and that is from someone who has done the field research at some cost lol! A lovely thoughtful and beautifully gentle poem Mark.

[Cody Williams]

Beautiful piece Mark! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[eglantine]

First stanza really reminded me of Coldplay's song, "Yellow" almost too familiar. Second stanza was a bit confusing in the way it's worded. Add a comma after "a compass to point you" to help clear that confusion? First line, the way it blends with the second, it just doesn't for me--it's jarring because it tears me from the poem. Another comma? Or fuse the lines more? Either way, yes, I agree with Coyote. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Mark]

ughh.. reading it again I see the Coldplay resemblance. Gotta change that. Funny, I was listening to Lumineers when I wrote it LOL Thanks for the heads up, will look at the other stanza. Thank you my dear!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem and photo. Sometime hard to find something to equal to beauty of the kind people in our life. You did. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote