Keep Me Cold

Hold in the rage

cold and blue

run into my core

Threatening to shard.

I feel no pain

there is no sun

only cold and blue

threatening to expand.

I lost my soul

such a long time ago

replaced by this ice

threatening your heat.

I will swallow up;

freeze the pain

I'll pierce this world

with my frozen rain.

I won't keep inside

any longer this 

dark blue rage

threatening to burst.

Where once love flowed

Now is crystal prison

cracked and bowed

I will coldly fission.

I let it go.                  

Author's Note

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

"Women cry with tears men cry with their fists." That's fucked up. Good poem Mark.

[Debbie_Philly]

Haunt lying beautiful piece and it flows wonderfully... Loved this !!

[paddy d daly]

I like how you portray the cold blue sense, loved the last stanza, the combination of emotion and science, excellent as always mark.

[Pryde Foltz]

I will swallow up;
freeze the pain
I'll pierce this world
with my frozen rain.

Wonderful work, Mark. Still, I hold out for a new spring.

[redflutterby]

Amazing poem Mark....releasing ourselves from the cold grip of anger and rage is hard. But we must melt it away with the sunshine and hope. ;-)

[DIVYA]

You created such a cold, icy and blue world. Foreboding and dark. A blue feeling expressed very aptly.

[A. Amos]

Mark every time reading your work leads me into your own created world, with hidden messages...nice piece of work

[Mark]

Thank you sir. I'm glad you enjoyed.

[A. Amos]

Always an honor and you're most welcome my friend