Webs

I'll warn you once

and not again

with my negativity

I spin a web

of sticky tendrils

black and dark

they'll wrap around

any spark

and crush the life

from it's shell

and create

its personal hell

I may look sweet

with smiling eyes

but my web

is your demise.

Reviews

[Azriel]

enjoyed this one a lot, loved the metaphor of the spider crushing its prey. that along with the powerful imagery and language as well as the bitter and dreadful tone, all works together well. would almost feel sorry for the person caught in that web.

[Alexander Rodgers]

''I spin a web
of sticky tendrils
black and dark'' That is genius, I like it a lot. This piece is short and somewhat simple, but you have a unique style :). Good work!

[~a.wall~]

It sounds like a warning. Very doubtful would be the person you warn.