Whisperer

Whisperer

A Poem by Dawn Jones

Fervent Imp

Mischievous Sprite

Proverbial Pixie

Spirited Little Thing

Whisperer

 

That is what you are

What I wish to be

Tell me your secrets

Hide me away

 

Protect me

Teach me

Love me

Hate me

Hurt me

© 2011 Dawn Jones


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love it! Especially last two verses/stanzas, it's very much like going through life, you find/meet people with energy to them, you become compelled, you get to know them and if you're lucky the hating and hurting part doesn't happen, but when are we ever lucky enough for that?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Did I mention how much I like this, when I read it before? No? How's this: I LOVE it! I hope that's clear enough for you.



Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this, good images. A bit confused about the hate me hurt me lines. Perhaps its very late and I'm not picking up on it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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