I miss you

It's pretty bad but I don't know just, something I wrote when thinking of someone

Can it really be

You're so nice and too caring

I am addicted

I miss you, your voice, how you felt

Everything about you

I look to you when my world breaks

For you, What am I?

I am trouble and nothing good

You have been cheated

Your heart beaten and destroyed

 I can not be right

The right one to fix your hurt heart 

Too many flaws within me

The time I've spent thinking of you

Can only be waste

For your benefit I must stop

Yet I know I can't

You're on my mind the hole day 

I miss you so much

Author's Note

Doesn't really follow any logical path, little random, doesn't seem finished, and ... bad, sorry

Reviews

[Britt Foster]

I typed up a much longer review but it failed and didn't show up right, apparently. :(

Buuut..
My point was that I really like this poem. The emotion in it is excellent and it lets me feel the care that you're feeling toward the person, yknow. I can connect well.

My only suggestions are to fix the spelling of 'whole' in the second to last line, and maybe add some punctuation to the poem on the lines that could benefit from it. Not really important edits but I was trying to be at least semi-helpful haha.

I love this poem, and I love you!

[Britt Foster]

Awww....cute poem. Sad, but cute.