The Woods

Josh was in the woods at dusk.                                    Not realizing the past deaths that filled the woods, it sucked him in deeper.                                  

Josh then heard the woods whispering to him. 

Josh followed the voices of the trees.                                            

Josh went deep into the woods. “Is this too deep?”  Josh thought.

Voices were getting louder and louder.                                                             The voices instantaneously stopped, Josh turned around

That’s when He came out from behind the trees.                            

That’s when Josh realized his mistake.                   

Reviews

[sohadtolba]

nice.... I just have one comment, the repetition of the name kind of distracts, but I like your imaginary :)