Beautiful poem, so rich with imagery. Another reviewer mentioned the Garden Of Eden, and that's what came for me too. Also I like the way it looks visually on the page. Nice job!
Leaving the Garden of Eden and all that it shouts. I love the images shown in this poem.
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 Week Ago
Thank you so kindly, Ms. PB. Will return the review favor for sure!
1 Week Ago
You are welcome and no rush. My words will be here whenever you have time.
1 Week Ago
Very kind. I'm thinking a nap is in order, but I shall return lol
1 Week Ago
Naps are awesome!!
1 Week Ago
Would that I could sleep! Gonna try again in a minute lol
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Sometimes I don’t sleep well either. Had that issue for many year since my teens. That’s why I l.. read moreSometimes I don’t sleep well either. Had that issue for many year since my teens. That’s why I like naps lol
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Yeah, same here. Either I'll sleep when I'm dead or I'm dead asleep lol. Lotta troubling dreams late.. read moreYeah, same here. Either I'll sleep when I'm dead or I'm dead asleep lol. Lotta troubling dreams lately, I'm afraid. But anyways. You've been most kind, as always, and I'll certainly return the review favor soon!
I’m lucky in the aspect I don’t have terrible dreams very often. I typically being me, have sult.. read moreI’m lucky in the aspect I don’t have terrible dreams very often. I typically being me, have sultry dreams, I know shocker lol
I have anxiety but I’m not typically terrified except flying and heights
Melancholic, loss, silence, love, daydream... all of this in an excellent poem...." serpent sang a siren's song" then.... silence, but still remembered...very emotional as well...
Warmly, B
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
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Lotsa memories lately. It's funny how people stick with us, isn't it?