First connection, Few words

Enjoy

Sometimes  

It takes just few words to connect  

It takes short messages to feel  

Few words that catch your attention 

Make you smile.  

Suddenly you feel , you breath  

As you know, 

That on the other side of your screen 

Someone feels the same way, 

Experience your words in a special way 

Eager for you to write ,  

More words ,  

Someone special that is almost ,  

Just almost  

Like you 

 

You close your eyes, 

Let your imagination fly  

You share your most beautiful words,  

Bodies touch through the initial connection  

You feel as you are one,  

Bodies and souls 

  

Author's Note

Let me know what you feel

Reviews

[Beautiful Intentions]

Like crying... If you truly wish to know what I feel, how reading this had made me feel, than this is my answer... Like crying. One of the most beautiful poems that I have perhaps ever read, so utterly breathtaking that by the close I was left momentarily speechless. How did you do it? How could you capture the feeling, that sensation of being touched by the words, the exchange between writer and reader so majestically? In one word this is simply 'perfection'... From the prickled flesh in the photograph to every word across the page. As if I had that moment... Entranced, encased by everything you had spoke of, where I had connected to the writer, to you in such a way that it felt as if I could have written the words myself. This brings back so many fond memories of times when author's have moved mountains within me. Brings back irreplaceable feelings of such love and joy. Sigh... This was nostalgic, JMaster1. Love at first read.:) Don't believe this feeling of the bounding shared between two could have been better written.

[JMaster1]

Now you left me with no words , if my words could touch anyone the way it touched you , it mean that I did something good , when you write a poem , the poem become public and it's not yours anymore , it touch certain people in certain ways , others find secrets between the words , but only few , very few can deeply connect to the words , the way you did. This poem reached your heart because you needed those words , you needed someone to describe what you feel

[Beautiful Intentions]

Indeed, dear one.:) This should be added to my favorites, and I will correct that mishap now. I was so emotional yesterday after reading this, that I do believe that I had fled your page to catch my breath. Aha... Such memories it sparked. Such wondrous memories. I was purely taken by this poem... And every ounce of praise was the truth. Thank you for sharing it!

[Beth Shade]

As someone who enjoys messaging, roleplay, and writing I connect very well with this. For a long time all of my friends were online and instant messenger was all I really had. And writing back and forth, hearing reviews, just things of that nature was my only connection. I saw a picture once that this would go well with as well. I thing this really brings to life a feeling, or a connection, that we all go through in this new age of technology. Its very well written^^ I enjoy it.

[JMaster1]

Thank you , I want to see that Picture

[Beth Shade]

i'll have to find it but I will send it to you

[athenaevergreen]

this is beautiful, ive been in long distance relationships and i always felt like it had a deeper connection and this is really good im in love.

[TheLonelyArtist]

You captured the beautiful initial connection between two individuals. I like the way this write conveys a close and intimate initial connection, despite appearing quite distant. This installs me with hope that it doesn't matter about distance or circumstance, it's still possible to feel that deep initial connection with someone; simply by speaking. 'someone special that is almost ,
Just almost, like you' this is amazingly sincere that could allow the coldest hearts warm and hope for romance again!

[JMaster1]

wow! you made me smile

[micky]

Thus is a great piece and takes my mind back to better days ,loved the way you use simple words to let ones imagination run far and venture to what only the heart can describe

[JMaster1]

Thank you dear friend

[Heather]

It's nice to know that in this day and age, thanks to the internet, so many people find comfort in knowing that they aren't alone. Interacting with people means more to some than we can ever know, even if it starts with a mere simple "hello". This truly captures how people can connect on a deeper level, without ever even " knowing" the other person. A great read :)

[JMaster1]

thank you , you are wonderful!

[Ardra]

Very beautifully expressed.... how words can play a vital role in connecting you to the other person who is far away still the warmth of your words can make the other person feel it even if they are physically away ...good one dear ....thanks for sharing this beautiful creation with us

[WithinTheHeart]

This is absolutely .....breathtaking.
Words which reflect so much truth.
I adore this piece.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very good. The words flowed so beautifully. Knowing that someone somewhere feels the same way as another does. Very good job :) liked this poem :)

[Birdinacave]

very nice, I thought it flowed quite well and was almost like a dream towards the end. I take that it's relating to something on the lines of a long distance/online relationship - and this often leads to letting your imagination or fantasies take over. It's actually inspired me to write something similar but with a slightly sadder/darker conclusion.

[JMaster1]

Thank you , I am glad I could inspire you