When I'm Gone

The day will come

When that day comes when I finally come to the very end of the quest of my journey

And I navigate through my last enervated mile

Just forget if you can

Please forget

Forget if I ever had a grimace on my face

Just remember, Just remember the smile and only the smile.

Obliterate it from your very existence of your thoughts

The thoughts that have the unkind  and malicious words that I have said

Just remember

Please remember the good I have done, and the goodness I have brought

Eradicate the memories of the times where I had any bitterness or agony

And remember the good times

The times when I've had tons of fun

Forget that I have stumbled and blundered

And sometimes fell by the way

Remember the fight

The fight that I have fought

Of the hard battles that I have won

Ere the end of the day

Please forget grieving for my going

I do not want you to be sad for the whole day

But instead

In spring time 

Just gather them

Gather the flowers from place we used to stay

And just place them where I now lay

And once again please

Come in the evening

Where the sun paints and colors the skies in the west

Where also the moon ignites the very skies with its gleam from the east

Just stand for the pause of the moment right beside me where I lay

And only remember my best

Becasue as of now, this is all what I have to say

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

I am just remembering the picture, does it speak millions of things, or we missuderstand the looks, i think eyes needs to look perfect picture, but not to get mislead by the ornated or simple pics,which doesnt look or be what they are.

[Joey Nizz]

Sometimes you can see a lot from just looking in someones eye, truth, lies, fear, happiness, sorrow and the list goes on, the eyes does paint a picture but yeah your right we shouldnt be mislead.

[JessyJacob]

But you can make it look weird too, when you know reality, yes the place where she(pic) is and whay she(pic) is doing really matters. I am sorry I am not competing, but also truth shouldnt die. No one is dummy, but a soul, which shows truth, lied, fear, happiness, sorrow, and the list... I think someone else has to look at that pis I suppose. is it not?

[JessyJacob]

I dont see those characters now, why they are being hided, if you really care someone is crying.

[Joey Nizz]

They say sometimes, one picture says a thousand words, I agree. everyone is beautiful even if they think their not, they are beautiful inside and out, we are all beautiful creatures on this earth. and we live on in this reality the best way we can so we can enjoy it with other people in our lives or even without, sometimes the only person who can make us happy is ourselves.

[JessyJacob]

Everyone is balanced, High pain and High suffering, it is tilted lessen the pain and less suffering, slowly it merges to one, where it doesnt sens whether it is pain or suffering, just one in one.

[Joey Nizz]

Yea with time of having both you'll get so used to it you wont even feel any different if you feel any of them.
But we should all try to avoid or to get rid of them, we shouldnt stay with them for a long time even if we cant help it, we should try in anyway we can.

[JessyJacob]

Agreed, we can talk ... if you further message me.

[JessyJacob]

I think the people who are loved ones are remembered, not for the goodness, but a lesson of love being taught with a touch of affection, being missused as touch of body, which doesnt be cleaned if once touched. Nobody is immortal, killing is not my policy, its cleaning of dirt in the mind constructing walls of boundary so that nobody dares to touch the wall, later we think of shaking/shivering it, also not to remember the fictitious love, which stays temporarily.

[Joey Nizz]

We do remember the lessons we obtained by just being around them or with them, and sometimes these lessons will help us.
I agree with what you said in this one as well.

[JessyJacob]

Yes, but they need watch steps, not as blind otherwise they dont need support.

[Joey Nizz]

yes, sometimes the only person who can really help you is you, you cant always count on someone else to help, sometimes you have to take the path by your self, to learn and to discover new things.

[JessyJacob]

Yes that is true, then nobody is fierce. Agreed.

[JessyJacob]

Immeasurable things being treated with high quality, yes Good is separate from Evil, they are not mixed now. Everybody will what is what.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, Im glad you see it.

[JessyJacob]

One gets who is made for him or her, nobody can kill or live.

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah, your right.

[JessyJacob]

Where the sun paints and colors the skies in the west
Where also the moon ignites the very skies with its gleam from the east

"i like those west and east, how about your talk and my jasmine freshness" - just thought of my poor(narrow shy - not too straight as i look) imagination, maybe it thrills you with touch of nativity and current openenss.

nobody of both is old or child, equally inside, where it supposed to be and when it needs to be. A heart of child face, face with heart of man/woman.

[Joey Nizz]

Sometimes the imagination can be really good for us, and yes we are not all equal, if your old young girl boy doesnt matter we all think differently and we all have different aspects in life and different dreams.

[JessyJacob]

Yes ,we need discuss what we need each other, why not equal, is not age really mattering now? I dont know, you can talk.

[Joey Nizz]

Sometimes age is just a number for some people, friends are friends regardless the age.

[JessyJacob]

I feel this is the attitude between mother and father, together as couple, facing the troubles of career, where he keeps her away for the goal of struggle to take care of family and also the country, and in the night, ignore his time keeping her off for total of 12 hours, and then be with family and her the next 12 hours of time, so that he can turn open his childish act of fun, teasing and loving back his wife,and adoring family, so that he dont neglect the fun of sorrow of nigth time, with sorrow of joy in day time. A perfect balance to ignore and correct, but it should be exchanged so that both of dont get bored of life and miss any fun of getting aged. Also both need support of each other to hook together, which binds them together as a commitment, where she also goes out to serve the country which is also a family.

[Joey Nizz]

If the love and commitment is strong, it doesnt matter how far anyone is from the other, i know it is hard but if you think about it they are doing it for their family and their country, in the end everyone is happy.

[JessyJacob]

Why then someone mistaken, did she really come for him or family or country, diplomacy, where what why it needs to be revealed, Naaga, Ariyillai? Nobody takes power until they see they are worth to hold it and opens to kill when it is needed, but someone can allude as if their property, though as command or terror as if you dont then you will lose me or given with love as a gift, it should just come with responsibility where nobody can enter that easily.

[Joey Nizz]

Responsibility should always be there, people should take responsibility for their actions and for what they say, because what ever they say or do next can change something or a lot of things in their lives or and the people who r around them lives.

[JessyJacob]

Responsibility is not something where you can escape, it just remains a bond in this life, and stays as companion in soul path. It is like promise you do before God, "Yes I do", where we are sincerely bonded together by God, that it doesnt require lawyer contract written, to prove or stand on word, and it is just not decided by one, it is the responsibility of everyone in family, and Nation, to stick to their word, but not run away or isolate, but control, and STOP(evil eye definition).

[Joey Nizz]

Yes I agree, people should be responsibly responsible for their family.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

[Ardra]

You write so beautifully....
And most of your writing touches my soul....
I thought of my dad ....after he passed away....I always think of his smiling face....than the days when I saw him suffer....
It's beautiful how you want your loved one to stop with you for a minute....in the evening when the sky is beautifully painted....
Thanks for sharing such a tender piece of art :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, I'm glad that you like them.
I'm sorry about your father, I'm sure hes in a better place looking down on you proud as he was before :),
Always remember hes best and the best moments you have shared with him.
Treasure the memories of him just how he treasured you as you were growing up.
Sorry again for your loss and sorry if I upset you by reminding you of him.

[Ardra]

:) he always has been a happy memory for me.... thanks :)

[Joey Nizz]

You are very much welcome ^^

[JessyJacob]

Nobody understand or misses when they are away, they need to be with each other so that they revive the instant love of fragrance, otherwise it kills them, but dont give too much burden to anybody, where the fruit gets burden to the tree and it has to bend for the overburden of crookedness of stamping as exploiting. Hope you look out as Swan which even can separate milk from water. Everyone tries to be Mom and dad, not a divorced or separated having two two people in a cage. Mistake can be ignored but when you correct it, it frees you from the sin of guiltiness and embarrassment of being sinned, where we were being left alone, unable to be protected, looking fierce, as God even want his devotee to feel embarrassed, but in turn teaches the dareness to be staright, not unfair of in and out.

[JessyJacob]

God even doesnt want*

[JessyJacob]

It just needs to rearrange the words meaning, so that we kick out dirt and keep the light, and look fair to society, I feel this is the diplomacy of a Leader , who is also God in heaven of home.

[Najam Us Saher]

Everyone dreams to be at peace and when they die and for once wants others to remember only the good in them. This nature of human was very nicely written. I loved this.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much and I agree with you.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺