Sorry

Sorry

A Poem by Joey Nizz

Everyone can say the word "sorry"
They can always say it
But
It doesn't have to be real
It doesn't mean that they actually meant it

If their apology was sincere and real 
then
You can actually see it by just looking into their eyes
And hear it through the sadness and disappointment in their voice

Only then, 
Will you realize, 
They didn't just hurt you,
They hurt themselves, 
Just as much.

© 2017 Joey Nizz


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Nice piece of truth there buddy-oh. Simple expressions can lead to even more heartbreak than what they began with, as the person you are saying "Sorry" to knows that that's a lie.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Your absolutely right my friend!
Your comment was sport on and for it I thank you very much!<.. read more
Sorry... a simple word, but so hard to say when you actually and truly mean it.
You are completely right that some people just say it and its just another word to them. It's sad when this happens and the person on the receiving is being lied too.
But it is those who have lied, will be the sorry ones in the end - sooner or later, they will lose face and respect from others around.

Good piece.

Mark.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Yes I agree, its not as simple as you think, it might look easy but saying is really hard. they will.. read more
matrixmark

7 Years Ago

Be real. Best way to be. Honesty is the best policy. Many people in my life have come and gone, but.. read more
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

If they stayed by your side till now then return the favor and stay by theirs.
And yeah peopl.. read more
They hurt themselves just as much. This is very true. I liked it a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Yeah, why lie when you apologize if you know it will also hurt you as well, sometimes I don't unders.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

We come across variety of people in our life and have to deal with them. You are welcome.
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

True, each one differently we cant treat everyone the same.
Many people likes to make all the things simplier and they just say sorry. This is for me is the first step of repentance and theres more if you are serious about chaging up. If not, keep doing the first step and you'll never reached learning. Only regret. Good piece. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

I agree with what you said, some people do find it just simpler by just saying it so they can get aw.. read more
I like this poem, because I feel if someone apologizes that means they don't plan on doing it again!
If someone apologizes to me, I never say it's okay. I say I accept it, because what they did was not okay..

Good reading for me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

I agree with you, some people just say to shut someone up and move on, but its not the way, say it l.. read more
Cool poem. Very deep. You are very good at writing about human emotion and sincerity. Maybe you could change some of the words around so that your writing picks up a different mature quality and professionalism, for example you could change 'Only then, You will realize, That they also did not just hurt you,But also them,Just as much.' to Only then, will you realise, they didn't just hurt you,
they hurt themselves, just as much.' I hope this makes sense I just want to help a fellow writer out.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking so.
I guess cause I know how others feel, and cause I know how will i .. read more
Only then
You will realize
That they also did not just hurt you
But also them
Just as much.

:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it ^^

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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