The Final Melody

The Final Melody

A Poem by Joey Nizz

The calamity of all evil
That covered the lands with corruption that ended in catastrophe
Bigger and larger than a mere destruction
It was the face of extermination but can it be?

A young violinist walked the land
His life hanging on the stings his violin had
Walking down on bloody rivers was not his plan
I'm telling you a story of a boy with a crushed dream
Surounded by people he wanted to play and make a stand

 He had to cover himself with a shawl
Because he was of color
That color was on him like a scar
Haters and racists everywhere he went
Always tailed and picked on him and this time he couldn't get far

With his beautiful melodies, he was an artist
Who was held captive chained with shackles from top to bottom in a cell in where they camped
A camp full of buffoons but he was the smartest
They were tough and brutal leaving his body with their burning stamp

At first, he had hope and faith
He fought them as he knew and could
But slowly, he melted like butter
Leaving him helpless and surrendered.

Scared and shaking, looking them with fear
one of them dug his knife into his eyes sockets
Just because he was looking at them with tears
Screaming in agony he fell down as they enjoyed and laughed at his suffering

Later on, he was nothing but a shadow
He lost his eyesight and his dignity and ever further than his dream
His skin darkened by the smoke making him look like a crow
Making him lose his passion, and well to carry on

They called upon him to play
but they had other plans for him once he gets up to play
To them, he was only a slave, who was blind and powerless

They found an old violin
Forced into his hands to play a tune
His frail hands tremble
And in the depths of his agony resembles

Violine on his chin fits
He plays, without eyes
From the empty eye pits
No tears fall as he cries

With his eyes taken
It felt like he was in a dream
Old memories are awaken
Like he is out of it it seems.

The one who took the eyes started to sing
The stench of death following his breath
Like a beast, sharp claws and bloody fangs
He sings of blood and death

Growing tired of the torture and humiliation
Every day it gets worse
Awful and terrible

He desired death, and death came
He didn't wish to be spared
He didn't beg for mercy

The evil man took aim
Fired at him, brutally with no remorse
and no shame
He fell down by his violin
Having his blessed end that finally came

Suddenly, a miracle happened,
A miracle happened to the fallen one
He saw his final sunset just like how he imagined
And to the Heaven, his soul and his violin have gone

And that was his final Melody.


© 2018 Joey Nizz


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music does what anything else fails to...very good work Joey..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

Well said I agree with you.

Thank you :)
Now I know how musicians get lost and play the music that touches the heart of others, they play their heart and soul out. I liked the descriptive journey of this tale.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, im glad you liked and understood the tale :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're always welcome :)

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Added on February 26, 2018
Last Updated on February 26, 2018
Tags: Violin, violinist, melodies, melody, prisoner, captive, blind

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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