HawksheadA Poem by JohnLAs yet, only a draft - please comment
Previous Version This is a previous version of Hawkshead. HAWKSHEAD I crossed a lake upon a boat; My! How I hoped the boat would float It did, and on the other side, Securely to the jetty tied Was confident enough to scramble Upon the shore in time to ramble Up and down a village street Over stones that hurt my feet In Hawkshead, Lakeland village - neat. A pub – The Sun – then took my eye; A pint, a pint became my cry, With ploughman’s lunch – Whose crusty crunch I gladly munch; On freshest bread – it must be said, To finest cheese my thoughts have fled Aye! Cheese, crisp bread and strongest ale With salad, pickle- they’ll not fail - Sustain us over hill and dale. We’ve finished now our crisp bread roll, Our village lunch, our gentle stroll; The rhythms of our footfall change As we extend our walking range And rising from our village seat We change to five iambic feet. The bank we tread has trees upon it Where feet now walk to gentle sonnet:- So, now our feet keep time to different beat Thus reinforced, our steps take to the road; The sun ahead calls onward – no retreat, Rippling through woodland, beech and oaks’ abode. We stride the lakeside’s golden afternoon Sampling the freshness of a moistened air Foot-feeling country’s beauty, Nature’s boon Mind’s eye entranced, such beauty to ensnare. This wonder comes of wholesome, simple things Just colours, scents, the form of wind-strewn cloud Imagination makes a waiting soul take wings While beauty makes the voice of man shout, Loud! With all the senses I – mere man – possess, I crave such beauty shall be more, not less. © 2009 JohnLAuthor's Note
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4 Reviews Added on May 26, 2009 Last Updated on May 26, 2009 AuthorJohnLWirral Peninsula, United KingdomAboutI live in England, and love the English countryside, the music of Elgar and Holst which describes it so beautifully and the poetry of John Clare, the 'peasant poet' and Gerard Manley Hopkins, which d.. more..Writing
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