Dont Like that

Dont Like that

A Poem by Sixth Moon
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If I were to write about 6 things I don't like the most what would I say?

"

The old lady in the car tried to run me off the road

I don't like that

 

Seeing people running around in circles to achieve the unachievable

I don't like that

 

Watching T.V.

I don't like that

 

Waking up in the middle of the night in a sleep paralysis

I don't like that

 

Not being able to dream as a child because of the yelling

I don't like that

 

People fighting for peace ( how can you fight for peace and stay peaceful? )

I don't like that

 

Running out of Dark Chocolate M&M's, When I am just getting started

I HATE THAT!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Sixth Moon


Author's Note

Sixth Moon
SIlly poem :D ignore retarted-nism

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I think I might hate those things too, ha ha!

Posted 15 Years Ago


i dont believe that this is "retarded" as you say in the notes... i believe that poetry is all about moving, self-expressing.... there are no "stupid" poems.... poems are meant to tell you, not tell itself. and you have done a good job telling yourself and your feelings through poetry. =)

keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Sixth Moon

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