Sun

 

The SUN

 

You are the Champion of the sky

Your ray of passion illuminates my soul

The conqueror of darkness 

 

Fearlessly rising from the east

The morning glance bewilders me with hope

Your shine gladly smiles upon the heavenly bodies until you lay to rest

Sleeping within a fantasy

 

Brilliant leader in the bright blue sky

Your love envelopes every cell with unsettled warmth

Plunging effortlessly into my soul to relieve the sadness

 

Honorable liberator in the canvas above

Reliever of tyranny, anger, fear, and saucy uncertainties

Forgiving classic entity terminating the grisly lies

 

You reveal the beauty of truth around me

Each morning is a ceremony to welcome your arrival

I passionately applaud your greatness

 

Champion of the day

Warrior of the sky

 

Reviews

[Mistral Bilgera]

wow there, jmonie. :)

"You reveal the beauty of truth around me"

love that line!

[Justin Tobey]

Excellent personification of the sun. I like how you gave it a personality and colorful titles. I liked the second stanza in particular. Great job!