Undecided

I wanna be free…

Just be me

I wanna fly

High in the sky

i wanna show you

what I can do

I wanna live

So I can give

I wanna grow

Into the star of the show

I wanna find

A way to be kind

I wanna reach

So I can teach

I don’t wanna lie

I wanna tell you why

I don’t wanna cry

I wanna keep my eyes dry

Because I wanna be

Me.

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

very very heart felt and emotional

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice. I like this part:
"I don’t wanna lie
I wanna tell you why
I don’t wanna cry
I wanna keep my eyes dry"

[quarintine_deathangel]

Nice poem, very well written and descriptive.

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

lovely , a real innocence to it ... :)

[Donald Cole]

this poem sets the tone of good affirmations for moving forward in life. the layout is exceptional also as it pushes out the importance of the message. beautiful....
Don

[Ezekiel Silver]

This is a very good poem. I don't see why you told me you're not good at writing poetry. Because you actually are good at it!!!

[Sunflower]

very powerful indeed, very nice write

[Chris]

An old singsong singalong, reminds of an old musical's lyrics - a Sinatra-style voice in the background as dancers swirl through the fore.

[Eve]

That was very powerful, particularly the last lines.