LOVE

LOVE just another word to be said

LOVE just another game to play

LOVE just another excuse to be made

LOVE just another way to get hurt

LOVE just another feeling to ignore

LOVE just the way I feel about you.

 

Reviews

[SparksLC]

I really like the repetition in this piece, it allows for the reader to see the points you're trying to make from all sides and appreciate them for what they are. This poem completely illustrates the K.I.S.S (keep it sweet yet simple) theme. It explains it perfectly. Great work! Keep it up! =)

[Jock Engelman]

very direct and very emotive

[Jack Isaac]

Wow! Does the last line summarize the poem or change everything? I was trying to think of what else LOVE is, but I think your choice of words has it covered. Well done! The color scheme works too!

[John Fitzgerald]

very nice. concise and direct

[Morrigan Nicole]

I really LOVE this one (get the hint?). I can realte absolutely and completely! very sweet, but equally as sad. Great work!

[exotic flotsam]

A word used lacking the true significance, and sheer power when used sincerely. I like your presenting love a a loaded word. It is. And not to be used casually when cast into someone's heart and mind. A risky word that. A nice write.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Love indeed, all these statments are true, as are the opposities, such is love, well done, good read.

[Jibey]

A sad piece... but well worked out...

[Pitta S Dev]

BEAUTIFUL.....

[M Garcia]

Excellent write. We've all felt that way.