Suddenly

People know my name,

Suddenly everything has changed

People are reading what I have to say.

For the first time In my life

I feel important

I see a purpose

I believe in myself

People believe in me.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Always proofread before posting! But, hey, you admitted texting has made you lazy, so what can I say? Fix the 'the" in the fourth line. That's the only thing that detracts from this from the heart, positive experience that has happened in your life. EVERYONE needs a purpose. Without that, our spirits would shrivel and die. Just a dry husk left...
And you can't love others well, until you love yourself! Keep writing!
Barbara

[Alex Vidmar]

this is great. easy to relate to.

[AK]

Wow! That's really nice! Even I feel that way, really. Great write!

[ChervenkovaM]

This is very nice and very well written. It's charged with emotions, I like it :)

[Distant horizons]

Yeah, writing rocks :-)
Nicely written. Well expressed.

[Maroon Surreal]

Short but convincing. Good job :)