We are one.

We are one.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

We're hand in hand,

Face to face,

Chest against chest.

Heartbeat to heartbeat.

My body, your body.

We are one.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Lovely. The title fits the words just as the words fit the title and the lovely imagery of two.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very simple but I liked that you have so much to say but say it all in so few words :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Again, so much power in so little words! Simple and awesome poem :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful words in a short piece! =D I love this!!
Great one!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was cute, This reminds me of me and my bestfriend. Sweet write I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very nice poem. It expresses your intent very well. My favorite lines are We're hand in hand, face to face. Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem...

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's short but powerful. With few words you create a vivid image of friendship. Great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice poem...Short yet creative.
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Roe
Cute and to the point great write

Posted 12 Years Ago



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