You.

You kissed me, when my eyes were closed.

You held me, we were fully clothed.

You touched me, when the feel arose

You loved me, when you felt it were right.

 You chose me; it was love at first sight.

You protected me, when I was caused a fright.

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

i love the flow of rhythm in this poem, especially here:
"You touched me, when the feel arose
You loved me, when you felt it were right."

[Kaylor Mason]

I like the rhythm of this one--like a clock pendulum

[CrimsonBlaze]

Small, but sweet. Like the rhyming scheme you used also ^(0_0)^ -loves rhymes- And very heartfelt. :) All i might suggest is maybe a little more to a closing but eh, otherwise I love it ^_^

[zero binty]

Gives off an aura of innocence. I like it.

[Cherrie Palmer]

The best poems never sound conjured, but flow with ease and ring of truth, well done.

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Nice flow, very sweet and simple. great work :)

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Honest and simply written, but I wonder about that last sentence. Nice writing!

You might want to look at this again: "You loved me, when you when you felt it were right." Too many "when you"s.

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the simple structure to this piece and the plainly stated emotions and actions. These are things that everyone deserves to feel. Great work!

[Relic]

Nice poem S. Love is a great feeling we all need in our lives. When we're lucky enough to have someone special that cares, it makes life worth living.

You might want to watch that 4th line.