Love you forever.

Shower me with flowers.

Kiss me in the dark.

Love me forever

and show me who you are.

I’ll be your girl,

I’ll be your world.

Just hand me the key,

The key to your heart,

I’ll treasure it always,

We’ll never be apart.

Reviews

[Tamia123]

This could be a song :) I love this!

[Alex Crow]

Romantic and sweet

[Sugar Plum ♥]

one very romantic, sweet, simple and honest poem!! I like it...
~nia~

[Tabitha t]

:) great job i am never dissapointed when i read your work

[Dayran]

For the soldiers of old, the key was their sword, to which they'll respond with,
' take it from me, don't ask for it.' Nice write!

[Angelic Surrender]

I love it :) great work

[Kaylor Mason]

A dream among dreams--if there ever was a true definition of beauty, I think you've hit it with this poem.

[Exxii ((Lauren)) Chem]

Simple, yet the message is totally clear. :) I like it, keep up the good work!

[Becky Clancy]

So cute :3 I love it

[Emerald Seas]

"Just hand me the key,
The key to your heart," Great lines!
I also like "Love me forever and show me who you are."
Another very good short poem!