A Poem by Jake Staffeld

I had frend ask me to write her a "happy poem." This was my best effort. Sorry if it's not so great, happy isn't normally my thing.


Once I knew a Sun ray

She was always happy

Never without a smile on her face

In her life, the sun was always shining

Never a rain cloud in sight


When the day finally came

That a cloud covered the sun

She fretted and fretted

And didn't know what to do


But then the cloud passed

And the little Sun ray

Became happy again

And her smile lit up the world


© 2011 Jake Staffeld

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Layla, I wa feelin down and made Jake write me a cheerin up poem. lol XD

Posted 11 Years Ago

Hahaha normally when you want to respond to soomething comeone says, you go thair page and post a comment

Posted 11 Years Ago

I wrote this for Abbey, Layla. It was requested. :P

Posted 11 Years Ago

Do I even want to guess who this is about,Jake? Very nice peom tho.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 24, 2011
Last Updated on March 25, 2011


Jake Staffeld
Jake Staffeld

Bend, OR

I'm in college, whoooooo. I like all kinds of rock, and songwriting. That's how I got into Poems in the first place. Some of these will actually be songs of mine I've modified. more..