Left alone

Left alone

A Poem by Jake Staffeld

After everything caves in
The world has crumbled
Into a city of gray
And the rain no longer stings

Lies led you down
Friends let you go
Falling apart in the dark
To a sorry love song

Because you've been blamed
For that which you didn't do
And these walls turn to gray
Become a nearing threat
Squeeze out the air

Sobbing out a protest
A plea of innocence
Screaming out the pain
In bitter words for the world

Tumble down into dark
Abandon what held you
Circumstances unfavorable are all you have
Spirits flee to a sanctuary

Leaving you alone

© 2011 Jake Staffeld


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I understand the poem. Sometime can't help pissing everybody off. I like the sanctuary of peace sometime. Life allow us to create separation or togetherness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great write:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this poem.
It's a really relatable, connectable topic and the structuring gives a rhythm as I read it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this allot Jake..and there's nothing worse for being blamed for something you didn't do... spirits flee to a sancturary... wow.. amazing stuff..xxx


Posted 11 Years Ago


really like the ending. good write

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Jake Staffeld
Jake Staffeld

Bend, OR



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I'm in college, whoooooo. I like all kinds of rock, and songwriting. That's how I got into Poems in the first place. Some of these will actually be songs of mine I've modified. more..

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