Deer Santy

A little boys letter to santa

 

Dear Santy

I no I was suppost to be good this yeer. I relley tryed.

Its not my falt that daddy got in trubel. I didnt think all

those police mens wuld get mad. I wus only playin wen

daddy calld for help lookin for me. We wus playen hide

n seek. Anywayz all I want for crismas this yeer is a gud

loyur. Mommy told me that daddy relley needs one.

Thank u santy claws.

 

Luv

Jaims

p, s, if I wuz good enuf for 2 prezens can I have a bike?

Reviews

[Aaron J. Wald]

awwww.... This is really cute. Not the whole thing of dad going to jail, but the boy writting to santa to help him with getting his dad out of jail. I really like this. When I read this I felt real warm inside. Even a scrooge like me (well... I'm just a bitter winter person.) feels a warmth for this piece. and no... I don't count spelling.

[syn]

I thought this was sooo cute.

[Celtic Cat]

oops. It's best to tell the other player the name of the game... to avoid such mishaps. Love this letter!! Excellent job!

[SM Davis]

this was adorable...and so sad! You did this very well James. Very well indeed!!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Aww that was cute. Clever. Nicely done.


Great write

[Paula M. Potter]

I think this is really cute and funny.

[Tania Leigh]

lmao James....too funny!

[Fantasyfairy]

Well done hun, this was so cute. I really enjoyed it, and I think he deserves the bike too, don't you? LOL XX

[desertraven]

Wow, James! There is so much behind such a short piece! Well done, my friend!
Sandra♥

[Amor-de-angel]

How dos a litle boi get in so muc truble?