Sour Valentine

Sour Valentine

A Poem by James Mayfield

Another desperate Valentines


With my loved one

The dray claimed anger

The night


And a single


For none

© 2008 James Mayfield

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Sad, yet so true. Valentine day sometimes loses its meaning and feels empty. A nice poem that tells everyone that not all think of love and happiness on this day. XX

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very sad James. I enjoyed reading it though.
Kelley Frost

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww... why is it that we celebrate singles awareness day... Great job...

Posted 13 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ahh! sad. I love you! I already have a valentine though. He is on the road again so I didn't recieve any valentines.
Oh well, words on paper are just that
and chocolate will just make you fat.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 13 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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4 Reviews
Added on February 15, 2008


James Mayfield
James Mayfield

Clarksville, TN

I am tired of the usual drivel that I have here. Yes, I was writing in High School. I was apparently doing a decent job as I was sent to a workshop hosted by Brescia College. Most of my works from .. more..


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