Colors.

very simple short poem about what colors do. Just felt like using some imagery with depth.

They fill the small dim cracks of this world.
They illuminate the very facts of life.
They grant emotions with a key trait.
They bless shapes with dimension.

The thought unlocks innocence.
The sight brings senses to reality.
The fact brings hope to people.
The concept ventures the unknown.
 

Reviews

[Calissa Knox]

Absolutely beautiful! I like how you put "They" at the start of each line on the first paragraph, and "The" for the second paragraph. It created a beautiful flow to the words, and added a very artistic feel. The last line is my favorite, "The concept ventures the unknown." You brought light and interest to something not many people think about. This is a unique, prolific and wonderfully written poem!

[Neville]

In my very humble opinion, this is what poetry is about... I like it, I like it a lot James

AGT's

Neville

[shahida.manha]

very nyc nd simple.iam a beginner in writing poetry.so i dnt feel myslf eligible 2 comment on such beautiful poetry.

[Playing with Demons]

I love the way you used words in a very dramatic way. It doesn't just a 3D depth, there is more and it flows in an abstract way...if that makes sense... :)
Everything is very true about color! I LOVE it!!
Cheerio!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

James I like the simplicity of this piece and the way you take a simple subject and analyse it's worth in a few lines.

[James Huston]

thanks, that's exactly what i was going for so you got that right on the nose, appreciate it.

[Laminators Dubai]

The start was good but end is great!
Heavy of them all with the best of colour...curious.