GRAVITY...

Overcoming negative gravity...

GRAVITY...

Gravity: weight, heaviness,
the state or condition of being grave;

Now we know the definition of gravity,
it is what it is, nowhere in the definition does it say
when one is down, one must stay down,

The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy,
sad but true, hate being at the forefront,

It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial,
I've fallen and I can't get up!!!

When can you remember in history the human soul giving in
so easily, (never) the thought of defeat to us human's is incomprehensible,

Now I totally understand hard times, but giving in, I just don't understand,
What happened to when the going gets tough, the tough get going,
that's the human soul I'm a custom to,

When the negative gravity is pulling one down, one should identify
with this unwanted energy and light the soul fire,
devouring anything negative in it's path,

Replacing that energy with positive energy,
water on fire, if you will,
hate breads hate and so on, love breads love and so on,
I believe that the reason one can't get up is because one is adding
gas to the fire and not water to eliminate it,

A negative gravitational pull is at times unbearable,
but it is no match for one's soul, giving in to negative energy
is down right weak, and when the soul fire is lit, one's
soul is an outrageous inferno that is awesome, and weak by no means...

So light the soul fire and get up already!!!

Author's Note

Negative energy is killing us all, even within the cafe at times,
I just want to be a spark of positive energy for all of us including myself!
Hope you enjoy my work and God bless each and every one of you!!!

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

Reviews

[R Smith]

sound advice James, a poem for our times you should be put forward as an example of how to live right :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[NeiL ArandA]

Some edit suggestions :

that's the human soul I'm a custom to, ( I'm accustomed to )

with this unwanted energy and light the soul fire, ( light the soul on fire ) adding "on" sound much better
So light the soul fire and get up already!!! ( light the soul "on" fire )

[Jamestown]

Neil, you are hired! Lol:) Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, I appreciate you.
read moreNeil, you are hired! Lol:) Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, I appreciate you.

[NeiL ArandA]

You are good my dear fellow poet. You have so much passion about God and what He had impressed in your heart. I should be back to ponder all your writings...

[Emily]

Lovely wording!!
Well done!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jetta Zippora]

Wow. A very inspiring poem, friend. It is true...so many people give into depression, anger, and despair when they could fight. We are all stronger than we think. Sometimes we have to push ourselves forward despite the tough circumstances in life. :) I can't wait to read more of your work.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

so much inspiring.... brilliant poem....a great message....

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your review, I appreciate it:)

[Akash Pathak]

I have learned a great thing from this wanderfull write,
" A negative gravitational pull is at times unbearable,.....
... So light the soul fire and get up already!!!"
by- You

[Jamestown]

Thank you, so very, very, much! If I can inspire or motivate 1then mission
accomplished! All glory belongs to God! Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Kami Grace]

"So light the soul fire and get up already!!!" has seemed to be a wake-up call for me. When we face obstacles or anything that hinders us from advancing, some stand up and carry on, but more give up and seek an easier path. Life is dull without challenges and chains that attempt to stop us from reaching our dreams. Just like gravity that forbids us to fly high. But no. We have fighting souls that stand against this pull, just like spaceships that sprint from this hardly overcome gravitational pull.

Well-written! :D

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, and for your terrific review, I appreciate it!
Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

(The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy, sad but true, hate being at the forefront,
It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial, I've fallen and I can't get up!!!)You've described the sad state of affairs of our once great and God fearing country my friend. This is an amazing write! ~Sharon

[Jamestown]

Thank you for your review and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

You are most welcome....and I am! ~Sharon

[Ehra Khan]

A very beautiful and inspiring poem.Hope definitely keeps us going in our hard times!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed! Keep hope alive!

[Mary Bradley]

Good poem Jamestown ... some of us can't find the light in the darkness of their suffering ... hopefully your poem will inspire others to be positive :-)

[Jamestown]

That's what I pray, thanks my friend, I also pray you are doing ok:)
I appreciate your review and b-blessed!