GRAVITY...

GRAVITY...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Overcoming negative gravity...

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GRAVITY...

Gravity: weight, heaviness,
the state or condition of being grave;

Now we know the definition of gravity,
it is what it is, nowhere in the definition does it say
when one is down, one must stay down,

The world has fallen to the gravitational pull of negative energy,
sad but true, hate being at the forefront,

It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial,
I've fallen and I can't get up!!!

When can you remember in history the human soul giving in
so easily, (never) the thought of defeat to us human's is incomprehensible,

Now I totally understand hard times, but giving in, I just don't understand,
What happened to when the going gets tough, the tough get going,
that's the human soul I'm a custom to,

When the negative gravity is pulling one down, one should identify
with this unwanted energy and light the soul fire,
devouring anything negative in it's path,

Replacing that energy with positive energy,
water on fire, if you will,
hate breads hate and so on, love breads love and so on,
I believe that the reason one can't get up is because one is adding
gas to the fire and not water to eliminate it,

A negative gravitational pull is at times unbearable,
but it is no match for one's soul, giving in to negative energy
is down right weak, and when the soul fire is lit, one's
soul is an outrageous inferno that is awesome, and weak by no means...

So light the soul fire and get up already!!!

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
Negative energy is killing us all, even within the cafe at times,
I just want to be a spark of positive energy for all of us including myself!
Hope you enjoy my work and God bless each and every one of you!!!

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

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There is fire in our souls
A burning desire to reign free.

Let your writing continue to do so for you
And may that spread wildly to others.

Congrats on great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Negative times and minds can dampen anyone's spirits but a positive influence can always pull you through the darkness. A strong flame will survive no matter how much dirt you put on it. A weak flame will cave. However those who are bright will influence anyone who has been left in the dark. Never let your spirit die.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

My spirit can't die, he who lives in me is greater then he who lives in the world!
Thanks for.. read more
This is an amazing writing it is a metaphor of how events make some persons feel while other persons choose to ignore them because they already fell down

Sometimes the best thing to do is to ignore them because the only one that could actually choose to physically raise them from the dead is Jesus Christ

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree completely, ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!
I pray for all to be saved, the .. read more
I too, believe this. Negativity can pull you down and dampen your spirit.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I see the similarities I find yours better it is fascinating I enjoyed reading was a pleasure thank you for sharing
Broken Girl

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Not better, different both with great messages,thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

"It reminds me of the old Life-Alert commercial,
I've fallen and I can't get up!!! " These lines perfectly describe negativity. Once things become negative, it can become a pretty big slippery slope. Very nice poem, I enjoyed it a lot

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Your words inspire, i'll be coming back to this one in trying times truly.. gravity of negativity can never hold us done. Faith in ourselves and the creators plan are the only weapons that will keep us alive in this fight. Cheers James. incredibly powerful work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I thank you for your kind review and always honored to know you enjoyed reading it
b-blessed .. read more
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We all need light so we can shine bright. The mouth but spits out what is inside of our hearts. So, it is there where the change needs to happen. I am happy that you have resolved to be positive.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree wise one, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I relate to your wise philosophical thinking. This was a treat yet again. Interesting how you compare gravity to people being, feeling grave and behaving negatively.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I thank you for your kind review and b-blessed!
Whoa Jamestown this is great poem that you have written. I wonder if this is an inspiration to Gravity movie poem that I wrote. Because if it is, I am so fascinated by the writing that u do. It's awesome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Your piece is untouchable, my inspiration came from the negative vibe of
the cafe lately, wit.. read more
Double T

9 Years Ago

It really does work. You should keep doing of what u love. :)
Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again:)

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