A Blur...

Longing for Love...

A Blur...

Today is not my best day
I want the ache in my heart to go away,

I completely long to be strong in love again
I feel my thoughts of my lady just blowing in
the wind,

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

My vision and emotions are so clear
then a moment later they just disappear, (a blur)

I am confused why my love must be detoured
I am becoming frustrated and it's quite absurd,

She awaits me as I for her finding my lady is a game
of cat and mouse, I game I am getting tired of playing
but if it means capturing the love of my life I will continue
waiting,

I know I must be patient but today my patients are at wit's
end and I so badly want my new life of love to begin,

Some men and women think it's okay to have 2 or 3
but I just want 1 to love have and hold just her and me,

Oh well, when the timing is right everything will fall in it's place
but for now I'll just pace, Lord I know that I'm a disgrace
but if you send me my lady, I promise to win life's race

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

I beg of you Lord, please let her not be just a blur
I want her, I need her, that is for sure...

Author's Note

God is good!
I must be patient and humble:)
Hope you enjoy...

Reviews

[GreenEyedPoet]

I can relate to this a lot, I'm going through the same struggle of trying to be patient. Sometimes it's so hard to wait for Gods timing, but we have to remember that He has perfect timing and getting ahead of Him will only cause more heartache for us. Another wonderful (and relatable) piece James!

[Jamestown]

I agree fully:)
Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Waiting for God's timing can be a little frustrating. But jumping ahead of Him can be heart breaking. Be patient. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Will do, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

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~~ a very earnest and honest prayer... ~~ i understand the emotion... ~~ i had to be very patient as well... and we have to be patient even after we meet them... because life can be very unpredictable... and sometimes there are problems...

[Jamestown]

So true, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Wesley Dingler]

Very very smooth, my friend. You delivered a heartfelt and even suspenseful message here. Whether she is just gone for the moment or she has yet to arrive i hope with all my heart she come to you with mystique and surprise.

[Jamestown]

Waiting patiently:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Shawna]

Very touching and honest. We all have those times and circumstances in our lives where we feel like we cannot wait any longer... even if we also know that what we are waiting for will be worth it in the end. You have captured your moment beautifully.

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[stars are far]

wow, that was very touching and very emotional. I loved the faith you have and you portarayed in this work, it shows that you are close to God. One day you will get the perfect lady, because you never lose when you are close to God, He will give you the best... and well, I want someone too.. but its almost impossible, I felt like at some point i lost my faith and im not proud of that, but this was very great indeed, and yes we shall all wait. Be blessed My friend

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Double T]

This is your best writing yet Jamestown.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[SoltreuSolPar]

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAYBE YOU CAN BE MY LOVE LOL JK. I LOVE THIS, JAMESTOWN!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

Sweet poem. One day God will satisfy the desire of your heart and show your the perfect lady for you.
A good write.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[RiverRei]

I love this piece. It makes me want to be that woman you're waiting for and save you. AND I'm not a blur lol. This is sweet and shows your sensitive side. You should write more like this. It put butterflies in my stomach, even though it isn't about me lol. Great piece Jamestown. I always love your work.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed.