A Blur...

Longing for Love...

A Blur...

Today is not my best day
I want the ache in my heart to go away,

I completely long to be strong in love again
I feel my thoughts of my lady just blowing in
the wind,

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

My vision and emotions are so clear
then a moment later they just disappear, (a blur)

I am confused why my love must be detoured
I am becoming frustrated and it's quite absurd,

She awaits me as I for her finding my lady is a game
of cat and mouse, I game I am getting tired of playing
but if it means capturing the love of my life I will continue
waiting,

I know I must be patient but today my patients are at wit's
end and I so badly want my new life of love to begin,

Some men and women think it's okay to have 2 or 3
but I just want 1 to love have and hold just her and me,

Oh well, when the timing is right everything will fall in it's place
but for now I'll just pace, Lord I know that I'm a disgrace
but if you send me my lady, I promise to win life's race

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

I beg of you Lord, please let her not be just a blur
I want her, I need her, that is for sure...

Author's Note

God is good!
I must be patient and humble:)
Hope you enjoy...

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Things will soon clear up, Jamestown--one way or another.
A heartfelt poetic prayer which, I feel fairly certain, will availith much.
Good read!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

That's for sure my dear; you will finally get her. Nice one.

[Jamestown]

Patients is a virtue:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Nini]

I understand patience wearing thin...patience is not one of my virtues either :-)
Very good write!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
powerful want.....need....prayers......
very passionate longings and sweet despair.....
true love makes everything worthy......
i pray for you................

beautiful poem Sir!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome Sir!!! :) :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Those blurry days are tough....when all we see is mist.....all we see is the unknown.....you have captured the longing so well my friend! Swimming against the stream is tough, but therein lies wisdom which will keep our hearts in tact!

[Jamestown]

You are speaking truth,thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Helena]

Such sad words penned here. A beautiful poem of longing for your 'soul-mate'. Keep faith and one day your lady love will not be a blur.....she will be a reality!

Helena

[Jamestown]

I will wait patient:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[child of God]

This is beautiful my friend you'll find her my friend thank you for sharing God is good all the time and all the time God is good

[Jamestown]

Amen! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ruth]

Love has to be one of the most visceral feelings...to yearn so deeply can leave such an ache...beautifully written :)

[Jamestown]

So true! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness!!! such a young man thing :) if i may sir? forget about it! .. let it go! .. look instead to be OK all alone ... in your own skin :) and i will put my money down things will change for you .. with love and peace
E.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

When you least expect to find her - there she will be... Be patient my friend.

:) Julie

[Jamestown]

I will:) Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!