Transparent...

Transparent...

I see through your lies
and peer into those evil eyes
I'm sure your surprised that I'm not
falling for your demise,

You are as transparent as they come
I can't believe you tried playing me for dumb
you piece of scum, I laugh at people like you
peek a boo "I see you" and there is nothing that
is true about you,

Your fake is crystal clear no matter how you try
to appear, I see you for who you really are and your
not as smart as you think you are,

So come out of the closet and face the music
the lies are over done you abused them,
they are even sick of playing pretend don't you
want this nonsense to end,

I will never respect you but that shouldn't matter
I just pray one day you will respect yourself
you my friend need some professional help,

Transparent to everyone that knows you
the only one your fooling is yourself
and I know that's got to hurt no matter what
you say, come out of the closet and repent today...

Author's Note

God is good!!!

Reviews

[Arjun Singh]

You creativity is highly praiseworthy, after this, you have impacted upon me as a really talented person do keep it up

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[free will]

So true, treating others like they are the fools...so transparent. I hope they do find a better way. Well done James.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Riv]

I'm not an overly religious person but I like this poem. In a sense I feel like I can relate to it, about how I feel about other people I have met in my life. Pen on!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[lovesrgraham]

Great poem! If everyone came with disclaimers, we'd all be more sane. It's hard to weed out the fakers and pretenders.

[Jamestown]

So true:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[lovesrgraham]

Anytime! I wish you blessings as well.

[E G TEN]

Hey JT, strong words, full of passion and clarity. That feeling you had when you finds out the truth,,,I got my red ink ready,,, shoot me a message any time my friend. Thanks for sharing! :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks a ton friend, i appreciate it:) b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Good one James. You are passing out a message for the fakers to keep their monster minds at bay for a moment and keep the real diamonds and inject the good things in their hearts so that it will make them realize their mistake. :)

[Jamestown]

Absolutely:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Your welcome James :)

[Matching Socks]

I wish I was better at picking out the bad seeds.
I think we want to believe in people, which is not necessarily bad but it means you get burned a lot.
But then if you didn't you might miss out on good people. So hard to see what's real.

[Jamestown]

Agreed! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Loved this Jamestown, true to form weed out the imposters so shallow, are they!! Come forth show yourselves! I just love the flow of this and the punch it delivers. Top Stuff! So many views and reviews speaks volumes of this good write! I look in awe!

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend i appreciate your kind review:) b-blessed!

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some people live in a fantasy world, taking what they can, when they can and not really considering what they are doing to those whose hearts are invested in them... a great write, my friend and at least you know the truth and that's all that matters...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

a pondering, thought full piece....smashing job my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!