The Fall

What's the worst that can happen?

The fall is terrifying
The fall is gut defying
The fall will pass you by
The fall; you might just fly.

Reviews

[Sangeetha]

a poem about love or maybe a crush i presume? very short and sweet and the words you chose were very impactful and very relatable very good work.

[JaneFoxscale]

Thank you. Really, I wrote it to try to speak to all situations, and I love how everyone perceives it differently. Thank you for taking the time to read it!

[Sangeetha]

Of course it was really good and I love how you made something so small have a big purpose in the sense that it apply to a lot of situations.

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A simple quartet. We all do fall in life. We never know if we will crash and burn or soar to greater heights.

A short and sweet verse, Jane.

[JaneFoxscale]

Thank you dear Doodley!

[mou]

REALLY BITTER TRUTH NEEDS ONLY FEW WORDS TO BE EXPRESSED !

[JaneFoxscale]

Why thank You!

[Nicole Schuster]

When I saw the title, I thought it was going to be long and descriptive, but I was pleasantly surprised that it was short and sweet. I really like this work - it expresses many different emotions and reactions to 'the fall', and the to-the-point was clever. Nice job :)

[JaneFoxscale]

Thank you so much!

[Riddhi]

I really liked this poem..Its a short , simple and sweet poem...Thanks for sharing and keep it up...

[JaneFoxscale]

Thank you riddhi!

[Cocopuffles123]

Short but sweet! I like the flying part, because it's kids like a metaphor, when you fall for so long, if feels like your flying. Just somthing to to think about.

[JaneFoxscale]

Thank you puffy.

[Cocopuffles123]

Who is puffy, hmmmm😏😉. Is it a boyyyyy?!?!?

[JaneFoxscale]

.no. CocoPUFFLES123..... Puffy..... Anyway

Lol

[Cocopuffles123]

I'm serious wut is puffy?