Deep thoughts of you

You and only you...

In the darkness of my heart,

You appeared as a candle

Just like a star,

In the night sky...

On my face of gloom,

You appeared as a smile

Just like a sunset,

By the bluish river...

In my pages of diary,

You appeared as a poem

Just like the luckiest pen,

For a writer...

In my imaginative thoughts,

You appeared as feelings

Just like the sweet dreams,

Of a dreamer...

Through my lips,

You appeared as songs

Just like the notes,

Coming out of a piano...

In my every glimpse,

You appeared as love

Just like the seven colours,

Glowing in every rainbow...

In my life,

You appeared as sunrise

Just as happiness,

After sorrow...

Author's Note

This is for the first time, a poem about a special and unique feeling which moved around in my heart. It disturbed me so much so I put it on the page of my diary...

Reviews

[Barbara Kasey Smith]

Jenny - this speaks in a voice of knowing your thoughts are focused on dreams desiring to come true; the images left this reader with imaginations of a great relationship waiting to happen. I truly loved it!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh!! its my good fortune that you loved this poem so much, thanks for reading....

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description.
"In my every glimpse,
You appeared as love
Just like the seven colours,
Glowing in every rainbow...""
I liked the above lines. Perfect description for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for enjoying sir,,, I am happy that you liked it...

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like it and you are welcome.

[samparks,sam]

oh............ great feeling in your poem. like it

[goldie uttamchandani]

So honest and refreshing!

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the review dear, and sorry for being late...

[unfathomd]

similies at their best! :D :D great work!! simple language! powerful emotions.. amazing :) literally id say a poetry tht i understood in recent times :D

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for your wonderful review my friend... Perhaps this was my first poem about 'love'...

[reet]

U do have a wonderful talent !!!
#making me insane

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for your sweet words, I am happy that someone liked my first try on a different type of poem...

[Inject Positivity]

A lovely write....You did an amazing job putting your thoughts in this poem....I loved the comparisons you made about your feelings with some beautiful elements.....Loved the simplicity you have maintained....Full ratings....

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks a lot mr.positive for keeping my words and reading my poem.... i m privileged by reading your review... thanks once again...