The wave of love

 

The wave of love

 

The love I feel for you is overwhelming

A love from deep within

Like a massive wave which is engulfing me

The power of this wave immense

 

I cannot imagine my life without you

When I wake up I think of you

Putting an infectious smile upon my face

That lasts the whole day through

 

I go to bed with you on my mind

Wishing you were laying beside me

As I fall asleep, I dream about you

Dream that one day we will be together

 

That day cannot come quick enough

The excitement of sharing my life with you

Brings me such pleasure

Please ride on the wave of love...

Reviews

[P.S.Chance]

Your words are clear and electric somehow. I really enjoyed reading this.

[FocusedAmnesia]

Well, while reading this, I felt as if I should experience this feeling, that I want to feel that kind of emotion for someone. Nicely written.

[KAREN]

Beautifully written!

[Yina]

WOW!!! That last stanza is mind thoughts exactly!! I love it!:)

[Helena]

Loved the title. "Pleasse ride on the wave of love"....what a beautiful poetic line. Much enjoyed Janie!

[Amila Jay]

A lovely write :))

[Mauricio Montoya]

I guess there is a someone special in your life judging by this read,
nice work,