The wave of love

The wave of love

A Poem by JanieB


The wave of love


The love I feel for you is overwhelming

A love from deep within

Like a massive wave which is engulfing me

The power of this wave immense


I cannot imagine my life without you

When I wake up I think of you

Putting an infectious smile upon my face

That lasts the whole day through


I go to bed with you on my mind

Wishing you were laying beside me

As I fall asleep, I dream about you

Dream that one day we will be together


That day cannot come quick enough

The excitement of sharing my life with you

Brings me such pleasure

Please ride on the wave of love...

© 2012 JanieB

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Your words are clear and electric somehow. I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Well, while reading this, I felt as if I should experience this feeling, that I want to feel that kind of emotion for someone. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Beautifully written!

Posted 11 Years Ago

WOW!!! That last stanza is mind thoughts exactly!! I love it!:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Loved the title. "Pleasse ride on the wave of love"....what a beautiful poetic line. Much enjoyed Janie!

Posted 11 Years Ago

A lovely write :))

Posted 11 Years Ago

I guess there is a someone special in your life judging by this read,
nice work,

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on July 16, 2012
Last Updated on July 16, 2012
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