Alberts 10 word poem

This poem has been specifically written for a contest "Alberts 10 word poem". All 10 words are in .

ALBERTS 10 WORD POEM

( All 10 words are in capitals)

 

As I sat staring out the WINDOW

Cup of earl grey TEA in hand

The LIGHT shone into my humble abode

Stained PATTERN on the old carpet

 

My BREATH was hardly visible

In the chilling morning air

I wanted to CREATE a TWIRL with my breath

But I couldn’t BARE the icy cold

 

My SENSES were numb

I held the warm cup closer

Trying to get some heat

Was it my imagination, or did I see the most beautiful BUTTERFLY fly past?

Reviews

[Sweets]

This is great! and very creative :)
I truly enjoyed reading this!
Good luck x)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice TEN beauty...

[Helena]

Very nice take on the "Ten Words" Janie! Very descriptive and enjoyable. Thank you for submitting this to my contest.

BTW you are "Albert's Poetry Cafe's" poet of the week! Thank you for your wonderful poems!

Love & Light
Helena :)

[PyroKitty24]

Beautiful! I could imagine it beautifully in my mind, which makes it wonderful. I could never make a poem, let alone one where I had to use certain words. You put them together nicely.

[KAREN]

I felt the cold while reading, but saw the beatuy of it all!

[sugar]

how unique! loved it!

[Marie Harrison]

Loved this imaginative write
I can picture it
Loved your use of the butterfly

[M Garcia]

Great write

[Linear]

Bravo , well done, and another poem is here :0)