Why Do I

Why Do I

A Poem by Jaspar

Feed her to the sharks at the lions gate.
Float the b***h or burn her at the stake.
Remember the love but feel the hate.
She played you make no mistake.

Why-do-I always feel the heat.
Always the one crying at your feet.
My stomach is a fist clenched tight.

Brand the b***h and bleed her slow.
Bury her and let her go.
I can't care anymore.
I don't care anymore.

Why-do-I always care more.
Pathetic puddle on the floor.
The one left holding on.
But no more, I'm f*****g gone.


© 2015 Jaspar

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i can feel the emotions in every word.cool piece

Posted 8 Years Ago

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gotta make this one a song man, flows lyrically and deep

Posted 8 Years Ago

Anger and loss. Float the b***h...well put. Very authentic feeling poem.

Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is awesome... no fear just pure straight forward emotion. Awesome work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow, this is a powerful write, full of raw emotions in this poem. I can really feel the wrath. The fury of the writer's pain shows real well in this. Wonderful! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

you can really put word together well i havent learned to do that properly yet. i should ust stick to writing stories

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, I feel as if I can feel your emotion bleeding out through the words you've strung together.
wonderfully satisfying, thank you for the read.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Woah, a lot of passion in here! It's so well written and flows very well, I can feel the heat coming from the words, your feelings are brilliantly displayed.
I especially love "remember the love but feel the hate", because it's not like all original love you had for a person just melts away but the hate is over-riding and all consuming.
Excellent X

Posted 8 Years Ago

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This poem bleeds passion and has great rhythm. It's very satisfying to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thanks E.J. I've been trying to let go of a girl for close to a year now. It's not easy as I'm sure .. read more

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Added on October 27, 2015
Last Updated on October 29, 2015



Port Colborne, Ontario, Canada

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