Who Really Cares?

Who Really Cares?

A Poem by JayJayBlue
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About realising you're about to burn bridges with someone but your pride and stubbornness prevents you from rectifying the situation

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There's nothing left but hollow resignation
No pseudo-philosophical statements can remedy
We're all wasting time
The same mistakes made again by me

They all presume to know what's best
No meaningless words can rectify 
The damage I've already done
We're just waiting to die

I'm fuelled by rumours
But defined by malice
I'm going to lose her
But I'm not inclined to care

There's no cure or settlement for us
You're rehashing the past to appeal to me
We're both f*****g up
We're just too warped and distorted to see

We all presume to know what's best
Provide weary words of consolation
There's no way to end the pain
But to numb the sensation

I'm fuelled by rumours
But defined by malice
I'm going to lose her
But I'm not inclined to care

© 2014 JayJayBlue


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'There's nothing left but hollow resignation
No pseudo-philosophical statements can remedy
We're all wasting time
The same mistakes made again by me'

This stanza shows me the intensity of the situation even though it is at the beginning of the write. I love this one especially as I can relate to this write a lot and it makes me realize sometime indifference is better than the pain you go through when you're still in contact with the person if nothing changes. Beautiful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Its a great piece of a poem
My rating 86

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can relate to what is written here, especially "not inclined to care" when something goes beyond hurting and indifference sets in. Great lyrics :) Penny

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 16, 2014
Last Updated on May 16, 2014
Tags: pride, loss, stubborn, regret

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JayJayBlue
JayJayBlue

Somewhere in the middle , West Midlands, United Kingdom



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What to say, I'm Jay (as you've guessed haha) I'm a guy who likes to write lyrical-poems, influenced by bands like Manic Street Preachers, Foo Fighters, Smashing Pumpkins, Pearl Jam, Stereophonics.. more..

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