Toxic

Toxic

A Poem by Jeanice montanez
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You

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And in the end, the essence of you was toxic 
i can feel my veins fill up with the drugs I call you 
but like all drugs 
you are addicting 
I need more and more of you to feel the same high 
until I overdosed and 
you left me.

© 2018 Jeanice montanez


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Quite a realization you had to hold tight to...

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is kind of the perfect metaphor for a broken heart. Well said.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on March 15, 2018
Last Updated on March 15, 2018
Tags: #poetry, #heartbroken, #heartbreak, #love, #end, #beautiful, #ifallapart

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Jeanice montanez
Jeanice montanez

naples, FL



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I am a teenager from a background that is full of pain suffering and abuse, i am a new writer and i write poems. im looking for the good in this messed up world and writing is how i get through a lot .. more..

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