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A Poem by Jeanice montanez
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Him.

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And every time you laughed 
I remember why i forgave you for breaking my heart.

© 2018 Jeanice montanez


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Some women are capable of forgiving a man for his hurtful ways in a way men cannot reciprocate. They're able to see a side of him that he may not be able to see. They can land on the good side of him rather than crash on the resentful side.

If I had a dime for each time a woman's heart was broken...

Whether forgiveness is warranted is something a woman must decide for herself. For forgiveness is not always the right route to take, lest she find wasted tears in her wake.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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yes, I can understand that

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong couple of lines.A lot said in such a few words!Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some women are capable of forgiving a man for his hurtful ways in a way men cannot reciprocate. They're able to see a side of him that he may not be able to see. They can land on the good side of him rather than crash on the resentful side.

If I had a dime for each time a woman's heart was broken...

Whether forgiveness is warranted is something a woman must decide for herself. For forgiveness is not always the right route to take, lest she find wasted tears in her wake.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 8, 2018
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Tags: #poetry, #heartbroken, #heartbreak, #love, #end, #beautiful, #ifallapart

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Jeanice montanez
Jeanice montanez

naples, FL



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I am a teenager from a background that is full of pain suffering and abuse, i am a new writer and i write poems. im looking for the good in this messed up world and writing is how i get through a lot .. more..

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