Mystery

Mystery

A Poem by Jeff

She came in through the window

With a diamond smile

And stars for eyes

Inner and outer beauty like none I've ever seen

She strode through the room effortlessly

Like on a cloud

She oozed a quiet sexuality

That tugged at my desire

She came in like a breeze

And left like a dream

© 2013 Jeff


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Now this is a little gem, the woman of your dreams...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the way this stays really open for interpretation of what it might have been that came drifting through the window, at the same time, the imagery description really sets a powerful tone. I couldn't help but see a beautiful female cat girl, with silver fur that glisten in the moonlight, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. She becomes the temptation within the vision brought on by your words, and then vanishes when I open my eyes from the blissful reverie. =D

XO - Kate

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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