Computerized

Computerized

A Poem by Jeff

Where is my love life

Is it through the screen

There must be something wrong with me


Where is my love life

Is it on my screen

What has happened to me


Where is my love life

Is it on my screen

There must be something they see in me


What is my love life

Is it on keyboard

Something must be lost on me


What is my love life

Is it on my keyboard

Is this love for me


What is my love life

Is it on my keyboard

There must be something for me


© 2013 Jeff


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The repetition effect emphasizes the heaviness of the conflict in the speaker's emotion.
Bur it's a nice poem though...

Posted 10 Years Ago


A wonderful write...Good questions...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jeff

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)............

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Added on October 22, 2013
Last Updated on October 22, 2013
Tags: computer, internet love, love, lust, confusion, neo-soul

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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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