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A Poem by Jeff
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Short and to the point.

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I want to go Home.


I miss the smell of Home.


I miss the warm feeling of Home.


I miss the noise of Home.


I miss the chaos of Home.


I miss the safety of Home.


I want to go Home.

© 2010 Jeff


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You would be correct.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Home is the girl you love, isn't it?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great work expressing how the feeling of home stays with us...The strange thing about it though is that once we leave it is never the same...We can remember the good and the bad ...the warmth, caring, scents, love, fun, disagreements, anger, but it is never the same...Glad that you wrote this enjoyed...Sunflower

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice emotion added to this poem: fear, desperation. Very good. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful write here of your feelings. This is amazing, simple and to the point. Nice job of expressing your feelings.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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