He Can't Love You

He Can't Love You

A Poem by Jeff

He can't love you


The way I can love you


He can't hold you


Like I could hold you


Let me have your heart


We can start


Down a path all our own


I can place you on a throne


Just like a Queen


But you're stuck with Mr. Mean


Keeping you down


Providing you with more letdowns


He can't love you


Like I could love you



© 2010 Jeff


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It is sometimes hard to see, that there are some guys out there that can love a certain woman better than a Mr. Mean... and you show this perfectly! A great write jeff!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. wow ... beautifully written, jeff ... i totally agree with emily ... this is simplicity at its ravishing best ... and i really don't know why there are men and women out there who are simply not discerning even if there is enough help and information there to make them discerning ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


simple words are a gift, these are wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is absolutely beautiful and so filled with emotion hun
so well written and right to the point :)
I liked it very much
well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2010
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Jeff
Jeff

Ankeny, IA



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