Heart Strings

Heart Strings

A Poem by Jen

I am lifeless until you touch my heart

I dance for your smile as it tugs at my strings 

My spinning pirouette gracefully executed, as you said "I love you"

I am still, waiting here once more for your words to move my heart

Here in my stationary solitude, I wait to be moved into life once more

Waiting for your touch...that one touch that leads to my heart

© 2015 Jen


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Often it almost hurts
when this occurs with the heart
because you miss them if you've
not spoken to them in so long.

The heart is a fragile piece
as it must be shielded and protected
always as mines gotten hurt so much
so I keep it protected and wrapped in
God's armour as we must shield our hearts.


Nicely painted to the page.

Thank you for sharing.

I agree with misery
Great work.

God bless. Benita

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

4 Years Ago

Thank you Benita, for your time to review this poem. Your words are greatly appreciated.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

You're welcome was a pleasure to read. Benita



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Vulnerability, honesty, sadness. But hope because you can still be moved into life and you are willing to wait.

Well done. Elegant, fragile.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, it is appreciated.
This is a great write Jen... the picture fits perfect. Overall I loved it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

4 Years Ago

Thank you Aaron, your reviews are always a treat! Thank you!!!
Beautifully articulated. Well done, girl. Really painted a picture.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review...much appreciated!
Jennifer M. Pennington

4 Years Ago

Anytime, honey!
Often it almost hurts
when this occurs with the heart
because you miss them if you've
not spoken to them in so long.

The heart is a fragile piece
as it must be shielded and protected
always as mines gotten hurt so much
so I keep it protected and wrapped in
God's armour as we must shield our hearts.


Nicely painted to the page.

Thank you for sharing.

I agree with misery
Great work.

God bless. Benita

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

4 Years Ago

Thank you Benita, for your time to review this poem. Your words are greatly appreciated.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

You're welcome was a pleasure to read. Benita
An excellent poem, dear Jen. One of your best creations. The artwork you chose perfectly blends with your words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jen

4 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Misery, your review is most appreciated!
Misery

4 Years Ago

Always welcome.

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