i wish that

just wishing for something that will never happen

 

I wish that…

 

I wish that you could see

The pain in my eyes,

I wish that you could hear

The fear in my voice

I wish that you could feel

The same way

I feel about you.

I wish that you could hear

How my heart

Skips a beat

Every time I see you.

Author's Note

what do you think? be totally honest please!

Reviews

[Steffi]

You definately let people into what your heart is feeling
This one just read a little awkward to me i havent placed my finger exactly on what it is...but its a good poem none the less.

Good Write

[Brie]

I like it! It expresses a lot of emotion that makes perfect sense. I like how you included the different senses, hear, feel, see. I don't know, it just makes it flow well. ;D
Great job!
-Brie