God's Picture Show

God has more stars than Hollywood,
His stars are brighter than any bleach blonde
glaring into your life.

 

These stars don't judge or change you,
they don't care what label your clothes are,
the stars are there for free.

 

Aurora makes her cameo every now and then,
lowering her many colorful strands of hair
and songs that even Dolby couldn't master.

 

Sure, there are stars in the movies,
but they pale in comparison to the naturals,
produced by the best.

Reviews

[Cdnsurfer]

Very nice reminder of the wonder of the universe; far more beautiful than any illusions we might "can" and ship out for mass consumption. Often, we forget to enjoy and be amazed by the delicate music of the universe; we get so wrapped up in ourselves. Lovely write, my friend. Rob

[Kelly D. Burris]

This is a wonderful piece. Puts some perspective on things.
thanks for sharing.
Kelly

[BrightEyes]

there are times when I am driving here in the mountains I call home...that I simply have to stop and enjoy the view...often making me late ....but always worth it. There is no picture that compares to what nature offers freely every day. wonderfully put into words here.

laura

[Ladysue]

I have to agree with Lionel, the parrellellism in this poem is outstanding. Highly creative write. Extremely clever and oh so fitting!! The last stanza is exceptiional!!!!! Jenny, another briliant peice by you. :)

[Lionel Braud]

like the parrellellism in this poem, its fantastic, very playful poem

[Roy]

i love this! beautiful thoughts painted colorfully and carefully upon the canvas...excellent jenny..

[James Watts]

Another great and visual. I love reading your poems because they have so much life and I always seem to connect with your your words. Very nice work.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

Im ready for my close up Mr Deville.....

*grins*

This is such a peaceful write...and I love the picture that you chose for it....