![]() Dying HopeA Poem by JeremiahhToo much of a bend will only cause a break. Now the heart cannot mend; now the love will not wake.
Ceasing from existence, warmth can no longer spread. Fading in the distance, hope will soon be dead. © 2010 Jeremiahh |
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Added on November 28, 2010 Last Updated on November 28, 2010 Author![]() JeremiahhBakersfield, CAAboutHey! My name's Jeremiah and I heard this was I great place to improve your writing skills. I'm a complete noob so any constructive criticism would be very much appreciated! :] Thanks! more..Writing
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