Nature's Splendour

people of this generation are so engaged in their lives that they are blind to view the exquisiteness of nature.only if they stop to observe the plants,sky,birds,grass they'd know the beauty of nature

Just across the stream, is located a place

With greenery all around and  blueness of the sky

                      

I sense the soft green grass and mellow glow of the sun

Which makes me overwhelmed and makes me want to run

 

When the light warm breeze brushes against my face

I feel the sense of utter bliss and peace

 

The parrots pigeons and doves flying in a ring

They twitter and they sing like musicians of the king

 

I see the bees as they buzz  and hover

Sucking the nectar of the colorful scented flowers

 

The true beauty of nature is found everywhere

We must open our eyes to observe and care

Author's Note

I really hope this poem makes a difference to people's perspective of looking at nature and make them understand and feel it in a more deep way.
And of course it would mean a lot to me if the poem is appreciated by the reviewers.

Reviews

[SkyeLight]

Well, I loved it :)
I strongly agree with you about nature. I live in a city mostly because of work and sometimes I forget how beautiful, peaceful it can be to just walk under the sun, slaloming between trees, hearing nothing but the wind and the birds. I'm not sure we're made to live surrounded by walls made of plaster and cinderblocks. If everything was only about me I'd spend most of my time outside taking pictures and breathing pure air (if it still exists).

Anyway your poem is great, I do feel the same sentiment :)

[Jess]

Thank you so much
i'm smiling like crazy

[Solar]

Jess - these lines paint such a wonderful picture!


/The parrots pigeons and doves flying in a ring
They twitter and they sing like musicians of the king/

[Jess]

thank you so much!

[Archos]

Hello! Nice poem. The descriptions are very vivid and make one feel as if he were outside during spring. Which is a nice twist during these old days ;) And I like the message of the poem too! Thanks for sharing!

[Jess]

Means a lot to me :)

[Elise Anton]

Lovely poem. It took me back to a place I stayed at, an old red railway carriage on top of a hill... Exactly as you described it! Thank you! And you are absolutely right. If we open our eyes, the beauty of nature is everywhere...

[Jess]

Thank you! :) :)