In My Dreams

In my dreams
I see you.
I see how happy we could be.

In my dreams
I see you and me
Together and forever.

In my dreams
I see us
Married; happy.

In my dreams
I see ONLY
You and me.

But in reality
I see you
With her.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

I really enjoy a poem that smacks me in the face with a good ending. Seeing someone you like with another is a very sucky feeling:(
i liked the length of the stanzas...painfully short but they add exactly what's needed to progress the poem...good one! Keep writing and start sharing:)

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderfulk poem! It had a great flow. Keep up the good work!:)

[sentimental~ galore]

Somehow I can totally relate to this. Dreams are an essence of hope, even if they stay just simply dreams…just having them gives one a reason to believe that anything is possible in life. Romance, success, and all the impossibilities…I hope your dreams come true.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the pace and the surprise ending. Dreams are what we need. Hard to make come true. Need timing and good luck. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[LadyNaida]

Aww, this is a beautiful expression of a tender love that is not returned. I can relate. Beautiful!

[Akshat♥]

real deep...so sad,emotional touch to it..
ending lines changed the whole poem...twist i thought..
nice poem:)

[Angela]

I really like the ending. The brevity of the piece only adds to the punch at the end.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

good work! nice and short, and dreamy till the slap in the face that is the last stanza...i like it! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

Awww what a well written write, but very sad. Thanks for sharing this.

[?]

Very good poem, didnt expect that ending. But it made the poem
Well written